My son has written this college admission essay(PIQ) with some examples of his leadership accomplishments and what he learned from the experience as a
captain of the varsity volleyball team. I need your help with this paper to be redone with a better flow. 350 words max.
Here the instruction from college admission:
1. Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group efforts
over time.
Things to consider: A leadership role can mean more than just a title. It can mean being a mentor to others, acting as the person in charge of a specific task,
or taking lead role in organizing an event or project. Think about your accomplishments and what you learned from the experience. What were your
responsibilities?
Did you lead a team? How did your experience change your perspective on leading others? Did you help to resolve an important dispute at your school,
church in your community or an organization? And your leadership role doesn’t necessarily have to be limited to school activities. For example, do you help
out or take care of your family?…
